Thursday, March 10, 2011
Lost and Found
On Tuesday the whole entire class played hide and seek.I ran to hide in the bush so I couldn't be found.When I knew I was completly hidden I waited and waited and waited.Suddenly I saw Emily and Alex P.I was as still as a stone until they finally left."Phew"I whispered.A wasp flew into the bush and buzzed like a fly. All three seekers were beside the pool.I spied on them until they ran to find everybody elsewhere. The wasp then left. I heard the bell ring so I left for lunch.
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Great writing Alex - you have included the interesting language we have been talking about. You have even added a simile or two - well done! I'm glad the wasp didn't sting you!
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Well done Alex!!I really like how you used really
ReplyDeletegood describing words.Well done!!!!!!!!!
Emily harrex
I really like how you hid from the taggers that tag you and then you get to be the tagger.
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